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lyssie ([personal profile] lyssie) wrote2005-03-08 09:16 pm

SG-1, OT5: Still Life, NC17

disclaimer: So not mine. Rating: NC17. Smut. Lots of it. Het, gay, sadly no lesbians.
Notes: Jara's fault, TOTALLY. She wanted more alpha!Jack/OT5....
Jane Mansfield's Car (the still unedited version) can be found: http://www.livejournal.com/users/lyssie/434699.html

Still Life
by ALC Punk!

Her mouth is wrapped around Daniel's cock when hands grab her hips. She's yanked inelegantly away, her all-day sucker almost immediately disappearing down Jonas's throat as Jack pulls her back against him, thrusting into her a moment later with a deftness that leaves her breathless.

She wants to object to this treatment, but Teal'c's licking his way down from neck to belly while Jack's teeth sink into her shoulder, and she can't find the breath to.

Jack's erratic thrusts and Teal'c's measured tongue send her spiralling over the edge, and she finds enough breath to cry out, unintelligible sounds that make Jack's lips curve into a smirk against her shoulder. Then he is pulling out of her, dragging her away from the other three and turning her. She catches his ankle, and they flop back, her legs straddling him as his breath whuffs out.

Then it's her turn, and he growls as she settles on top of him, hips rolling while his hands close on hers and drag them behind her back.

Not enough room to move, but she makes do, grinding against him, making him growl again and bending her head to thrust her tongue into his mouth. She twists when he thrusts, and he comes with a grunt, mouth sucking on hers.

Gently, he releases her, and she brings her hands up to cup his face. He pulls her up further, and his fingers find purchase, then slide into her.

It's always like this, she thinks as her head falls back, and his mouth moves down her neck. So intense she wants to scream, but there isn't enough sound in her lungs. There is barely breath in her body to do it, and it's always him that does it. The others are window dressing, and they know it by now, even if they still participate.

She knows that if she looks over, she will find them wrapped around each other. Teal'c sucking Jonas, who's sucking Daniel, who's sucking Teal'c. She thinks they're a little predictable, but then, so is she.

So is Jack.

His fingers twist and drop her over the edge, and her cry is closer to a scream this time.

She collapses against his chest and simply breathes, feeling him relax, his arms looping around her, his mouth touching her neck. With care, Sam turns her head and kisses him gently.

The grip around her tightens, then slowly releases, and he slides away from her. She lets him go, turning to eye the now-climaxing trio with a jaded eye. They used to have less scars and bruises. Daniel has a slight twitch in his shoulders now, Jonas sometimes spends hours working away at it. Teal'c is beginning to get old, which scares her sometimes.

Fingers slide across her waist, and she turns to meet his mouth, then sighs and relaxes into his chest he falls against the head of the bed, pillows propping him up. "You're thinking too hard."

Usually, they don't talk.

"Yes."

His lips graze her cheek, and he shifts and settles her more comfortably. She wonders if she'd irritate him by going for a blanket. The room is beginning to feel cold, now that the sex is over with.

Before she can voice the thought, Teal'c slides over and kisses her cheek, then drapes the comforter over the two of them.

She's supposed to be getting up, she thinks as she snuggles closer into his arms, enjoying the feel of chest hair and leg hair and his chin on her shoulder. But maybe she'll stay. For now. After all, they're getting older, and it's not like this won't happen again.

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[personal profile] woodface 2005-03-09 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
See! This is exactly how I like my Jack being alpha!

Whoot! Am still amazed that you manage to write this and leave my head intact. Guh, so frakking hot.

*adores you*

*wonders if she could ever get you to write Kara/Sam/Jack*
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
*snerk* Yay!

Mwahaha. I am evil. That's how I do it. *firm nod*

*adores back*

....er.... Maybe.
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[personal profile] woodface 2005-03-09 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Wieeeeee! Don't change your evilness!

*snuggles*

*bounces at the maybe*
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Mwah! (yes. yes it is. And, for some reason, the image of Jonas/Teal'c/Daniel is actually appealing...)

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
...and based on ancient greek erotic pottery! (oh, early porn, HOW I ADORE THEEEEEE!!!!!!)

Seriously, I LOVE the pots that just have a string of people sucking each other off. It's obscene at first and then OH SO AWESOME looking. ... er... YAH!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Mmm. Early porn.

*fluffily cuddlesmooches Liz*

Like celtic knotwork. With dicks.
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[identity profile] surreallis.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome! I'd always hoped you'd write a little sequel to that OT5. Jack's such a selfish bastard. ;)
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-03-09 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* Yes, yes he is.

*pets Jack*

[identity profile] fenriss.livejournal.com 2005-03-10 01:41 am (UTC)(link)
Hurray! I've actually never read OT5 before. Delightful.

Listen, the sg1_beyond_otp community has been awfully dead. Would you mind if I post a link to this over there? I think this should be widely read :)
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-03-10 02:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :) OT5 is... probably an acquired taste.

Go right ahead. I hadn't even considered it (mainly because I forgot it was there. oops). *g*