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[lyssie]

Wow. I'm gonna burn in hell (they restarted the fires). ....Pete Shanahan/Daniel Jackson. I swear, this is SO not my fault.... I'm going to bed now.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1897785&time=1086582264

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[elly427.livejournal.com]

Oh my God! Oh my God! You wrote Daniel/Pete! Oh my God! I think I love you, just a little. Oh my God.

Not the way it had when his ex-wife found him in bed with the plumber.

It's all so fucked up and then this- this one line makes me completely reshape Pete. Suddenly he's a complete and utter asshole but not because he's sleeping with Sam like in so much other fic. Yay! Oh, yay! This is really complete character development in like, three pages. Love, love love! And funny!

Her unconscious movements around Jack O'Neill proved that she might never let him go.

That's such a great line. So great. Articulates something I think a lot of shippers see.

Yay! Daniel/Pete! Pete/Sam! Pete/Jack? (hee!)

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

*snerk*

What's odd, is that I don't try to think of Pete as a bastard. It just occurs naturally. And it's weird, because I have tried *so* hard to be objective about him, and yet he keeps slipping over to the side of the devil...

Pete/Jack scares me. Scars me, too, possibly... Dear god, that would be fucked up. "Neither of us can have her, so we'll screw each other." o.O

And the unconscious thing... it's, it's the same thing I used to see when watching Farscape (Ben and Claudia). And it's fabulous chemistry between two very gifted actors, basically. But it translates down well into the characters because I like it. Erm. *g*

[elly427.livejournal.com]

it's the same thing I used to see when watching Farscape

Oh my god, YES. Good lord. Yes. Exactly. Totally.