lyssie: (Jonas - You're really not that bright)
lyssie ([personal profile] lyssie) wrote2005-02-02 03:52 pm

Reviews of the heart...

So... just got a review on the Sam and Jack are drunk and make s'mores story... Apparently, the reviewer thinks "it's a bit raunchy"

...no, REALLY?

I have no idea if this is a good thing or a bad thing.

Seriously. Adults having sex. It's not going to be all hearts and flowers.

[identity profile] splash-the-cat.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
S'MORES? No wonder they were shocked!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. Jack used a microwave to make them. *shocked and appalled*

Er. Well, he would have, anyway.

[identity profile] karma-aster.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Naked marshmallows! Dear god! Think of the CHILDREN!
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[identity profile] surreallis.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
I don't get the flowery-Jack attraction. He's SO not flowery. Hence, if you find him attractive, why do you want to change him?

If your writing is raunchy, then so be it. I love RAUNCHY!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
But Jack loves kittens and puppies and always calls her Sammie!

*ugh*

Hrm...

[identity profile] katcorvi.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
S'mores aren't raunchy, they're sticky.

Anyone who thinks that Jack O'Neill is going to be all hearts and flowers is not watching the same show you and I are.

Just reread the story. Damn, but it's good. Not raunchy, maybe sticky, and definitely good. Thhpt to that other person.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
They are watching the Bizzaro Stargate.

Thank you! :)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/cecilialisbon_/ 2005-02-03 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, raunchiness.

[identity profile] cheekygal.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh dear, the dreaded raunchy label. You mean Jack and Sam were having sex for *gasp* fun and not merely to procreate a superbaby?
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
No! And Thor didn't even ask them to!

er...

[identity profile] cheekygal.livejournal.com 2005-02-03 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I bet they didn't pray for forgiveness for their fornicating ways, either.

Oh, the SHAME! ;)

[identity profile] livilla.livejournal.com 2005-02-04 03:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Why thank you, Captain Obvious. Did you also know the sky is blue?

People are stupid sometimes.