Reviews of the heart...

[lyssie]

So... just got a review on the Sam and Jack are drunk and make s'mores story... Apparently, the reviewer thinks "it's a bit raunchy"

...no, REALLY?

I have no idea if this is a good thing or a bad thing.

Seriously. Adults having sex. It's not going to be all hearts and flowers.

Comments

[splash-the-cat.livejournal.com]

S'MORES? No wonder they were shocked!

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

Yeah. Jack used a microwave to make them. *shocked and appalled*

Er. Well, he would have, anyway.

[karma-aster.livejournal.com]

Naked marshmallows! Dear god! Think of the CHILDREN!

[surreallis.livejournal.com]

I don't get the flowery-Jack attraction. He's SO not flowery. Hence, if you find him attractive, why do you want to change him?

If your writing is raunchy, then so be it. I love RAUNCHY!

[katcorvi.livejournal.com]

S'mores aren't raunchy, they're sticky.

Anyone who thinks that Jack O'Neill is going to be all hearts and flowers is not watching the same show you and I are.

Just reread the story. Damn, but it's good. Not raunchy, maybe sticky, and definitely good. Thhpt to that other person.

[http://users.livejournal.com/cecilialisbon_/]

Mmmm, raunchiness.

[cheekygal.livejournal.com]

Oh dear, the dreaded raunchy label. You mean Jack and Sam were having sex for *gasp* fun and not merely to procreate a superbaby?

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

But Jack loves kittens and puppies and always calls her Sammie!

*ugh*

Hrm...

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

They are watching the Bizzaro Stargate.

Thank you! :)

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

No! And Thor didn't even ask them to!

er...

[cheekygal.livejournal.com]

I bet they didn't pray for forgiveness for their fornicating ways, either.

Oh, the SHAME! ;)

[livilla.livejournal.com]

Why thank you, Captain Obvious. Did you also know the sky is blue?

People are stupid sometimes.