lyssie: (Sam goddess)
lyssie ([personal profile] lyssie) wrote2007-04-15 08:43 pm

fic: SG-1, All In a Day's Work

Disclaimer: not mine.
Set: season ten of SG-1
Pairings: none.
Genre: er... action, angst, teamlove, gen
Rating: R, language, violence, adult situations.
Notes: Part of this has been sitting around for far too long. I'm happy to've finally finished it. This came from... gods, a stupid fic I read on Teh List where Sam was date-raped. As far as I'm concerned? This is more what would happen.

All In a Day's Work
by ALC Punk!

"You drugged me." It wasn't the best thing to say to the guy who'd bought you a drink, Sam Carter decided. But her brain was becoming sluggish, her reaction time felt off.

And the guy next to her, cuddling, had his hand on her leg. He insisted the quiet corner was 'more conducive' and she hadn't objected (it was hard to object when you were bored and looking for something interesting to do, and it might as well be the twenty-something with blue eyes who'd smiled and bought you a drink).

Now she was beginning to think it had been a bad idea all around. But most especially, coming to a bar. But then, her bar track record was dismal.

At least this time, Vala wasn't with her, causing a disturbance.

"What? No, baby--"

Her hand grabbed his, and her fingers easily found the pressure points Teal'c had shown her years before. Pressure points she'd used over and over again during the course of her tenure with the SGC. "Do. Not. Call. Me. Baby."

"Ow, what the--"

Sam's world tilted slightly, and she shoved up and out of the booth, grabbing the table to stay upright. "I don't feel so good."

"Here, honey, let me help you there," he said, moving to stand next to her, solicitous and concerned.

Close enough, and Sam's elbow slammed into his ribs as she turned into him, her fist hitting his jaw. She swayed as he doubled over, and slammed her doubled fists into the back of his neck while snapping her knee up into his nose.

He, whatever his name was (she really needed to think about getting names before letting them buy her drinks), collapsed onto the floor, coughing. "Jesus fucking--"

Sam kicked him in the crotch, satisfied to feel the crunch of tender things under her steel toe. These boots had been the *best* investment ever. "Don't call me 'baby', you asshole."

"You broke my nose!"

"So?" She struggled not to fall over as a wave of dizziness assaulted her, "You drugged me."

And, head high, Sam stalked away from him, heading for the ladies room. It was a small affair, in this tiny hole in the wall. No one tried to stop her, or even suggested she pay for her drinks. Hell, not a single one had even seemed to notice the little altercation. The bathroom was a single room. Staggering in, wrinkling her nose at the scent of stale urine and vomit, Sam closed the door and pushed the lock in before her legs gave out and she slid unceremoniously to the floor.

God. All she wanted to do was sleep.

No. Sleep bad.

There was something she had to do, she decided as she stared muzzily at the toilet across the room from her.

It took her forever to crawl across the floor, and she didn't want to know how many germs and diseases she'd picked up. Luckily, the last person had been sanitary, and she didn't have to flush. But then the dilemma presented itself: her hands were now filthy, covered with god knew what.

Finally, she remembered the pen in her pocket.

Her fingers were almost too clumsy, but she got it out, and stuck it down her throat. The instant gag reflex was almost enough, and then she caught a whiff of the floor again.

And that was all she wrote. Or puked, in that case.

Sam sadly watched her dinner and the beer she'd consumed disappear as she flushed, wincing at the taste in her mouth and wondering if she could make it to the sink to rinse it. And her hands.

With perseverance, she could. Standing was possible because she'd trained herself to be able to perform even on no hours of sleep. Days spent in the field when sleeping wasn't possible, nights spent in her lab working until the dawn had broken. Or just sleepless moments when she didn't want to face her dreams.

The water tasted awful, but she figured she'd live.

The soap smelled like candy, and her stomach rumbled in annoyance.

No. No puking again. She'd hopefully gotten rid of the last of the drug, though it was already effecting her. Slipping along her blood and turning her reflexes to shit.

Falling over would be bad, she thought. From the floor, the paper towels looked so far away.

She had fallen over, she finally realized when she couldn't reach the faucet to turn it off. Somewhere, fear was spiking through her, causing more adrenaline to flow. But she couldn't quite feel it. Couldn't quite concentrate enough to remember why she was scared. And why she needed to get to a phone. To get help.

Drugged. She'd been drugged. The thoughts swirled around and she remembered puking. But not why.

The how of it was obvious, the room she was in stank.

Reminded her of too many cells, too many close calls (and Daniel wasn't dying again, was he?). "Help." she whispered.

Or perhaps she said nothing at all. Gripping onto consciousness was like climbing a rock wall with her hands tied behind her back.

The sound of her phone ringing took time to decipher. Time and effort, and Sam didn't remember pulling it out and pushing the right button. "Hello?"

"Colonel Carter!" Vala's voice was cheerful, "Have you had sex yet? Daniel thinks--"

"Vala." She interrupted. There was something important she needed to say, something she couldn't remember. Sam let out a sound of frustration. "I'm locked in the bathroom."

"Sounds kinky, Colonel. Is there something you're not telling us?"

"No. Yes." That was it. A spurt of memory and clarity appeared, and Sam managed to whisper, "Help. Don't think I can..."

Before she passed out completely.

"Colonel?" Vala's voice echoed in the room, coming from the fallen phone. "Sam? Sam, what's--Daniel, there's something wrong--"

-=-

Vala had intended to tease Colonel Stick-up-her-ass Carter. The fact that the intention had gone sideways made her worry only slightly. She was, however, annoyed that Daniel hadn't let her drive. "I'd go faster than you."

"But you don't have a license," he snapped back. The car swerved as he moved past a slow-moving car. "Has the location of her cell phone changed?"

"No." One of the technicians in the control room had triangulated the still active cell phone. They'd left the phone off the hook, so as to keep the link open and the cell phone active. "Not much longer." Hopefully.

Daniel didn't say anything else, but the car sped up.

She understood. Sam Carter had been a friend of his for years, she'd stood by him in battle, saved his life and he'd saved hers. It was the kind of loyalty she wasn't used to seeing. The kind of loyalty she was a little jealous of--not that she'd ever admit it.

And she was in trouble. If there was anything Vala had noticed in the short time she'd been on SG-1, it was that, if any of them were in trouble, the rest came riding to their rescue--even hers. That was why Cameron and Teal'c were riding silently in the back of the car. Cameron had lost the coin toss for the steering wheel. He'd pouted quite cutely, in Vala's opinion.

"Oh!" She suddenly jumped in her seat as the little red dot got brighter and a loud beep echoed in the car. "I think we're nearly there."

Another beep, and then Daniel pulled into the parking lot of a rather seedy little bar.

"Everybody out," Cameron said, "And try not to attract attention until we know what's going on."

There was a mix of ages in the bar. Young, old, they didn't seem to care. Or even notice SG-1 as they stepped inside and looked around. Vala pointed the tracking thingy and swung it slowly, before stopping as it pointed towards a hallway to the side of the bar. "There." She said, as it beeped insistently.

A few of the patrons glanced at them as they moved to the back, but none got up or called out to them. They were the most unfriendly people Vala had encountered. Well, encountered within the last ten days, at least. Eleven days before they'd been shot at by Ori soldiers.

The door to the bathroom was locked when Daniel tried it. So he knocked on it, "Sam? Sam, are you in there?"

When there was no response, he backed away and let Teal'c inspect it. Then the larger man pulled a lock pick from his pocket and set to work. Thirty seconds later, the door popped open and he stepped back with an air of a man who'd done his job well. Vala was sure she could have picked it in less time, but she thought his effort was admirable.

Cameron moved to cover them, as if this were a real op--not that he had a gun. They weren't allowed to take guns off the base. At least, Vala had been told they couldn't. For all she knew, the rest of them had guns. Teal'c stepped into the small bathroom, and then moved towards the still form laying on the floor near the sink. Vala followed him, wrinkling her nose at the smell. While Teal'c carefully checked Carter for injuries and a pulse, Vala grabbed her cell phone and turned it off.

"Damn." Cameron knelt on Sam's other side and looked at Teal'c, "You'll need to carry her--Jackson?" Cameron turned to look at Daniel, who looked pale, "If you can't drive any faster, I have dibs."

"Got it." Daniel tossed the keys at him and moved to help Teal'c scoop Sam up. He touched her cheek, then stepped back.

"Let's go to it, people."

Vala let them all file out, then brought up the rear.

No one gave them a second look as they made their way back through the bar. Vala stopped at the door and looked back at them, then shook her head. And these were the people the SGC were trying to save.

-=-

Sam woke up with a headache, the taste of something dead in her mouth, and the certainty that something was wrong. Cameron was asleep in a chair next to her bed, snoring. Something was definitely wrong, then. What it was, Sam didn't know. She couldn't remember. She couldn't remember a fucking thing from the last twenty-four hours. Or even more. It was a frightening thought.

She must have made a sound, because Cam woke up and blinked at her, "Sam? Hey." His hand touched hers, fingers gentle. "Good to have you back, Colonel."

Licking her lips, Sam asked, "What happened?"

"What do you remember?"

Standard SGC prompt, of course. She frowned, sorting through her memories. "I don't--We had a debriefing, and Landry gave us a week of downtime, and I went for a ride on my motorcycle, but after that..." Fear gripped her. Sam hated not knowing what had happened to her, what she'd missed. The fact that it could have been something like an abduction didn't escape her.

"That's good..." Cam kept his gaze steady as he wrapped his fingers around hers, "Near as we can tell, someone drugged your drink at the bar. You managed to puke most of it up, but it still knocked you cold. Doc thinks your memory might come back, might not."

"Why?"

"There are some sick puppies in this world, Sam."

"So..." She gave a shaky laugh, "Not the NID kidnaping me for experiments, then?"

"Not that we can tell." He tugged at her hand, "Just your normal, everyday, pervert, we think."

"Great." That didn't help, really. It just meant she'd have to be even more on her guard when out on her own. She tried to smile at Cameron, "So, did they...?" She couldn't say it, couldn't even complete what she was thinking.

"No. No, you punched him. Landry sent some cops to check out the place, and the bartender says you started yelling, hit the guy and then locked yourself in the bathroom."

Good. Sam closed her eyes, relieved. "How'd I get back?"

"Vala was calling you--don't ask me why, I don't know. And you said you needed help. One of the techs had a thingy for tracking your cell phone, and, bam, there we were." He chuckled, "We figured you might make it back on your own, but it's always good to keep SGC personnel from spending a night on a bathroom floor. By the way, when did Teal'c learn to pick locks?"

Eyebrows up, Sam gave him her best blank look, "I have no idea. You'll have to ask Teal'c."

"I did." Looking disgruntled, Cam dropped her hand and stretched. "He just raised his eyebrow and told me he'd never tell. So, since I know you taught Jonas, I thought, maybe..."

Folding her arms over her chest, Sam snorted, "You thought wrong. Now," she moved to sit up, "If you'll excuse me, I need a shower, fresh clothes, and a ride out to pick up my bike."

"You think that's wise?"

Sam glared at him.

"Right."

She softened, "Cameron, if I don't get my bike, who will? I can't stay cowering here, worried that the next guy who buys me a drink is going to try to rape me, ok?"

"Right. However, Samantha," he emphasized her name with his own glare, "You will, in future, not go to seedy bars in the middle of nowhere."

"Bite me," she suggested.

"You taste like licorice, no," he tossed over his shoulder as he obeyed her handwave and headed outside of the curtain so she could climb out of bed and dress.

"I do not!"

"Do to!"

"I do not times infinity."

"Do to times infinity plus one."

Rolling her eyes, and countering him (again), Sam got dressed. Obviously, Cam needed his ass kicked. Maybe they could arrange to take up some planes on their time off. She could fly rings around him, then he'd shut up about the licorice thing.

Yeah. And pigs would fly--without the aid of Asgard technology.

-f-
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[identity profile] surreallis.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 02:09 am (UTC)(link)
Lyssie wrote SG-1 fic!!

But... but... Sam doesn't meekly become confused and lie still while the guy rapes her? And then she doesn't tell Jack the next day and have him call her a slut and then rape her also? (Because how will she learn otherwise) I... I don't understaaaand!

Oh, this is SO much better! :D
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
I did! I still have a large amount in my WIP folder. I'm trying to push it out of there....

Dude. I don't even remember if that was the fic's premise, but it probably was, and, ew. Sigh. I hate Teh List...
Thank you =)

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[identity profile] desert-vixen.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 02:53 am (UTC)(link)

I think I love you.

DV
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

[identity profile] stexgirl2000.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Now that is how Sam Carter would handle a would-be-date-rapist! Kick his ass! And think while she had the time.

And I love it that the rest of the team came and got her. And Vala's parting thought as they leave the bar: priceless.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
YES. Mostly because, if she weren't drugged, he'd be unconscious, and if she were, she'd notice. SG-1 has been drugged far too many times for them to not recognize the beginnings of it...

It was originally just Daniel and Vala, and then I realized that wouldn't work because, well, it IS SG-1. So Teal'c and Cam muscled their way in. *g*

Thank you =)

All in a Day's Work

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[identity profile] holdouttrout.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
Now that's the Sam I know and love. I assume there was a particular fic that prompted this one?

I've started to become slightly squeamish about storylines where women are abused--and there's not particular reason, but it doesn't sit real well with me. I think part of it is the fact that the women--who are otherwise capable and intelligent people--become completely dependent on men to defend them and give them their worth back. And part of it has to do with the idea that people see that sort of storyline as automatically valid.

So thanks for bringing our kick-ass Sam back.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I had a rant typed up, but it's at home because the modem went wacky last night. Thank you =)

Mostly, fandom is annoying in that it doesn't like strong women.

All in a Day's work

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[identity profile] pataka02.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
I've never seen an ep of SG-1 but this fic totally rocks and now I'm wishing I did watch the show. And it helps appease my frustration about the stupid Kara being raped by Lee fic and then falling madly in love with him fic that I read. So thanks!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Yes, well, fic that doesn't demean women is always good.

Dude. That still, just. Pisses me off. ARGH.

[identity profile] miseradreamer.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Nice.. and very much more believable. Sam would obviously kick ass *is a no-brainer*
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

She would, at least, notice if she was being drugged. Dammit.

Also? Your icon is DISTURBING.
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[personal profile] zorb 2007-04-16 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! Sam punches people who annoy her. This is canon - even before "The Quest," because hello, Air Force?

Also, I want to know about the licorice thing. *taps fingers*
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
This is not to say she has Kara's track record. BUT. If she's threatened, she's not going to let them get away with it. Bah.

I wish I knew. ;)

Thank you

[identity profile] hyari.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
YAY!
*sigh* Sam, Jonas, lockpicking. *SAD*
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed. Thank you =)

[identity profile] annerbhp.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
It's nice to know that there is some purpose to crappy fic. It spurs fantastic Lyssie fic! Thanks for doing your part to balance out the Universe. :)
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

I like balancing the universe. ;)

[identity profile] meeshy.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 09:54 am (UTC)(link)
I love you. You should write SG1 more often!! You really really really MUST write more Daniel&Vala and Sam&Cam because they rock. Yay for kick-ass Sam!

I want to know how Cam knows Sam tastes of licorice...!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. =)

Er, I may try? I'm coming out the other side of being intensely shippy, which makes it... feel weird, to write SG-1 fic.

I don't know how he knows.
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[personal profile] aella_irene 2007-04-16 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Hooray for Kickass Sam! And how does Cam know about the licorice?
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-16 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

And, er, I don't know...

[identity profile] 6beforelunch.livejournal.com 2007-04-20 03:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's great. So perfectly Sam. Of course that's how she's react to some sick jerk in a bar.

But this was so good that didn't even bother me. :)
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-04-30 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Ack. I thought I'd replied to this. *blush*

Thank you =) *gleeful*

Ack. This was written before then, and probably started before Beachhead, in fact. Though, I should have caught that, considering how amused I was that they finally chipped SG-1. Arrgh.

[identity profile] green-grrl.livejournal.com 2007-04-30 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooo, I just followed [livejournal.com profile] stargateficrec here, and I love it. Yay for kickass Sam (because she so does kick ass)! And awesome Vala, too.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
*blinks*

Thank you =)
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[identity profile] zerabell.livejournal.com 2007-04-30 11:35 pm (UTC)(link)
This was great, just how'd I image Sam in a situation like this. I have no idea what the 'Teh List' is, but from the sound of it they sound like a collection of some crapy fiction. Hurra, you've turned it into something good!

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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

Being cranky at stupid people does tend to make me write fic, yes. *g*

[identity profile] gunhilda.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Love it! Just how Sam would handle such a situation. But ick about the bathroom floor...
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-06-21 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =) Sadly, the floor was a necessity.

[identity profile] hollywoodgrrl.livejournal.com 2007-05-01 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice! I love how, uh, visual the first part was. And a bangin' way to begin a fic! "You drugged me." FTW!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-06-21 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. *pokes lj for not sending comments*

Given that I tend to being with "she--" or "he--" a lot, I'm quite pleased with that. =)
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-06-21 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
*nods* She isn't superman, and she can't just shake it off--but I can't see her falling under the influence that easily. Not without some resistance.

As to the licorice thing, er, hah. I wish I knew. *g*

Thank you =)

Sam and rape

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Re: Sam and rape

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[identity profile] amilyn.livejournal.com 2007-07-21 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is OUTSTANDING. I love Sam's response, her determination even as her lucidity fades, the visceral details of the bathroom and making herself vomit and trying to get to the sink and paper towels and barely answering the phone from Vala...I love SG1 driving to get her, just to make sure she's okay, then sitting with her...I love her giving Cam the, "Like I'm going to hide away" remidner.

Really excellent. I'm glad I finally got here via the Sam Whumping Fanfic List. Great job.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-07-25 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

I'm pleased canon keeps reflecting that I'm right (especially about the tam checking up on her. *g*)

[identity profile] besyd.livejournal.com 2007-07-21 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Ack! How did I miss this the first time around?! (Just like I miss a zillion other things: by not getting online enough those days. (sigh)

Fabulous! Your Sam is really Sam. This is her to a T.

Thank you, thank you!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-07-25 11:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Er. I know not?

Thank you. =)

(even if I know my Sam is actually a few steps removed simply because she's snarkier.)

(Anonymous) 2007-08-26 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
Whee! How did I miss seeing this fic before? So reflective of their relationship. Also, the licorice comment - priceless :)

~J
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-08-26 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

Sam and Date Rape

(Anonymous) 2007-10-04 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
I think the other story you are referring to where Sam was raped in her own bed was a story by somebody called Grizziesmom (in the Heliotrope adult archive - I started reading it before I realized what I was getting myself into - don't think I'll be reading anymore on that website). I read that story and was utterly astonished that she wrote Sam's character that way. She doesn't know Carter at all, if she thought that could possibly happen to her, or else she was somehow fantasizing about it herself to see where the story would lead her. THIS story, "All in A Day's Work", is how I would see Sam reacting to an attempted rape. Grizziesmom did women a huge disservice in portraying Sam the way she did in that story. I've just started reading SG1 fan fiction, and hope other authors would learn who these characters are - get to know them and how they would react - before they start writing stories so out of character. I just don't "get" why some writers get such a thrill out of writing such graphic, violent scenes like that other rape.

I know, I've blathered on long enough, but I was really annoyed with that other story.
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Re: Sam and Date Rape

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
No worries! Thank you for the lovely words. =)

I was just a bit surprised to have new feedback pop up.

I think that might have been one of the fics I read. There've been others, not to mention Telkena's fantastically bad series where one installment has Jack raping her to prove she loves him. And then, on top of that, there's a ton of "Pete Rapes Sam" fic, which is obnoxious, given that Pete's a nice nice guy.

Blah. The misogyny in this fandom is so annoying.
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[identity profile] sg-fignewton.livejournal.com 2008-09-18 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I've just had the pleasure of reccing (http://community.livejournal.com/stargateficrec/1161350.html) this. :)

Thanks for writing a fantastically in-character Sam!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2008-09-19 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. Thank you so much =)

I got angry at the way I kept seeing her portrayed as helpless, and it's easy to write from that sort of anger.
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[identity profile] dameange.livejournal.com 2008-09-18 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
you? are the awesome. this story? is the awesome too. {g}
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2008-09-20 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =) I had good inspiration.
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[identity profile] aurora-novarum.livejournal.com 2008-09-18 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Came via the ficrec. I love Sam's reaction to the situation. Like how here on Earth in some stupidbar, some 20something punk has the nerve to drug her. I think she was more annoyed by his audacity than by any fear (that is until the further lack of motor coordination kicked in).

Love how you had the narrative flow naturally, even as more and more gaps happen in Sam's perceptions. Love Vala's timing and how she instantly pings on to something being wrong...leading to team rescue!

And Sam and Cam at the end too cute. Cam is just jealous Sam taught Teal'c how to pick locks (and Jonas! Whee! Gratuitous Jonas mention!) and not him.

Great story!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2008-09-20 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

I've always thought that most Earth-based threats would make SG-1 giggle, a bit. After a while, they've been tortured by everyone. A bar fight? Some dude trying to rape you? Easy to deal with.

I love Jonas and mention him gratuitously as often as possible!

[identity profile] sg-lab.livejournal.com 2008-09-18 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
It has been a long time since I've read any sg-1 fic. So sick of the Sam bashing. Anyway this was a lovely fic. I found it through sgficrec I believe it's called. This was very believable and not over the top.
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2008-09-20 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you =)

The Sam-bashing always gets on my nerve, hence my general lack of reading fic unless recced or written by people I trust.

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