Hot Dog fic beta?

[lyssie]

Erm. As I've kind of, I think, finished the Hot Dog fic (and have no idea if it works or not), anyone willing to go prod it and see? Contains spoilers through, er, probably Scar, to be on the safe side?

Comments

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

Thank you. =)

[sabaceanbabe.livejournal.com]

Do you want comments/suggestions here or there?

Either way, it's a good fic.

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

Either/or. *g* (I'm so difficult)

Thank you =)

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

*smooches!* Thank you! Of course, my inability to remember to spell like an American coms back to bite me. *runs off*