lyssie: (Grayza - Fatal blow)
lyssie ([personal profile] lyssie) wrote2005-02-14 12:50 am

ficletdoubledrabble. sg-1

erm. was reminded of something, and saw the 'world ends with a whimper not a bang thingie' line from some poem...
disclaimer: not mine. Set: s8. Or so.

Poet Calling
ALC Punk!

It happened on a Wednesday.

The birds were singing, the sun was shining, and Dr. Daniel Jackson was turning to say something to Teal'c about cataloguing artifacts SG-14 had brought.

Flowers waved in the breezes on the surface, bees dancing among them as they have since the beginning of time. Colonel Sam Carter and General Jack O'Neill were flirting over their jell-o in the mess hall. He had red, she had blue.

They say that before you die, your life flashes before your eyes, and you see everything you should have done better.

At that moment, there was no time for regrets.

For Daniel, it was like seeing something bright in slow motion. He, at least had time for thought. Oh no, not again.

Teal'c registered the burst of energy slicing through the base a second before it was too late to do anything.

Jack had glanced down to prod his last piece of red jell-o when Sam gasped. He met her eyes as the world dissolved around them.

The birds stopped singing, the flowers stopped moving in the breeze.

All that remained were gases in an ever-expanding wave that would someday dissipate into the vastness of the universe.

[identity profile] karma-aster.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:18 am (UTC)(link)
P.S. and the line is one of T.S. Elliot's from "The Waste Land."

This is the way the world ends.
This is the way the world ends.
This is the way the world ends.
Not with a bang, but a whimper.
woodface: (not so tough)

[personal profile] woodface 2005-02-14 12:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Meep! You killed them all!
ext_18106: (Giggles - I heart you)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
hee. I did, I did! ;)

[identity profile] fallenbelle.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
At least Sam and Jack died together. Their luv is so angsty and pure. Now they'll be together throughout eternity. Wait, methinks I've been inflicted with too many Mary-Sues of late. Hmmm...
ext_18106: (Giggles - I heart you)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 05:26 pm (UTC)(link)
*snickers* So very true....
havocthecat: the lady of shalott (Default)

[personal profile] havocthecat 2005-02-14 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your icon. Too great!

[identity profile] rosewildeirish.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't wait to see what you do with this beauty (Fire & Ice from Robert Frost:

Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To know that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.
ext_18106: (Giggles - I heart you)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
*eyes* Poetry b-gone!

Er...

*tries not to think of anything (easy, since I'm still tired)

[identity profile] rosewildeirish.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 05:39 pm (UTC)(link)
But...but...it's Robert Frost!!!

How can you say b-gone to Robert Frost???

*mutters* Next you're going to be dissing e.e. cummings...
ext_18106: (Giggles - I heart you)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*laughs* I never said I had any class or education....

[identity profile] rosewildeirish.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, overall, I can pass on most poetry. But Robert Frost and e.e. cummings just hit me where I live. So. Pretty.

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 08:06 pm (UTC)(link)
HOW did I miss this? :loves:
ext_18106: (Giggles - I heart you)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I do not know. *smooches*

[identity profile] liminalliz.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
it's like i skipped an entire page of teh flist this morning. :DISTURBED:

So who killed everyone, in your ever-entitled opinion as the author?

[identity profile] rosewildeirish.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Bart Simpson?

...

...Homer Simpson?
ext_18106: (Jill RE:A - While my sky)

[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2005-02-14 09:40 pm (UTC)(link)
The shadows from Babylon 5. */prompt*

[identity profile] livilla.livejournal.com 2005-02-19 04:46 am (UTC)(link)
:D You really enjoy playing with them, don't you?

[identity profile] livilla.livejournal.com 2005-02-19 08:07 am (UTC)(link)
*adds this to the list of "Reasons Why Lyssie Rocks and I Like Her So"*