arg. damnit.

[lyssie]

Beta help is required, as my brain currently sucks. Anyone who would like to could wander over and eyeball my Gaeta fic and let me know if it's complete crap, or has typos that I've missed would be loved....

Comments

[ebneter.livejournal.com]

"Deadjournal"? What am I missing?

Story is good. I like Gaeta straight, personally. No idea why. You missed one typo that I saw:

She shrugs, takes nother bite of noodles, turns

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *snugs*

Deadjournal was the Livejournal alternative. I usually just use it for spam and stuff.

Gaeta straight or not, he is Sparky, and thus, well, cute.

[audioboy.livejournal.com]

I liked it! (But then I'm partial to Gaeta because I'm a fan of Allesandro Juliani's late father. Plus I talked to his mum on the phone once. :) ).

It looked good to me. Only comments:

"student-made movie" = (do they call them "movies" or "films" in the series?) Maybe use "vid"?

I'm not the only one who thinks Ellen Tigh might be a Cylon! ;)

"But he's suave and confident, and he blew himself up at a very early age." -- QuoteFile! (if there is one, anyway).

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

*glee* Thank you, darling. =)

Vid. Yes. *changes*

Ellen could be a Cylon. Even though I kind of scarily love her so.

I don't think there is one...

[audioboy.livejournal.com]

*glee* Thank you, darling. =)

I live to bring even the *tiniest* bit of glee into your life. My work is done here.

*wanders off into the sunset*

[musicforcylons.livejournal.com]

I am going to bed. Really. But first...



Geata fic is glee!

[katcorvi.livejournal.com]

Sparky! Oh, that was fun. *g*