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best mary sue idea ever.
SG-1, but could spread out...
The beginning I don't have clear. Story opens with Jack captured by some guy on Earth, who's not nice. He treats his young wife really badly, and they've got a baby. For some reason, they're out in the middle of nowhere, in the open air.
Jack convinces the girl that Bly (dude, in my dream, he was John Bly, and I'm gonna call him that) is an ass, and she deserves more, etc. And so does her son. Her kid is her weak spot.
They break out, but have to leave the kid behind (shhh).
Somehow, they end up seperated, and the girl takes her courage in hand and goes back to get the kid. Bly verbally abuses her, tells her she's a slut, etc., but she gets away from him.
Unfortunately, she figures it's only a matter of time before he catches up to her, and she wants her kid safe, so she tries to track Jack down. But she doesn't know his last name, only that he works at Cheyenne Mountain (which may've been why Bly had him. May not), so she goes there.
The SFs at the gate won't let her in, and she's all paranoid, but one of them asks if she means Colonel O'Neill, and she says yes (figuring she's got nothing to lose), and they try to call him and get his machine. She's not patient, though, in fact, she starts to panic that Bly will show up any second and take the kid, and the SFs won't stop him, blah, blah, so she gets a sheet of paper and writes Jack a note begging him to take care of the kid, and that's she's grateful he tried to help.
And then she walks into hell (I love that line). Or drives, really.
Jack, who for some reason, was with Carter, eventually turns up at the Mountain, and discovers the kid and the note and stalks out to the car. Sam, who has a basic idea of what went on, tells them that under no circumstances is anyone but herself or Colonel O'Neill to deal with the kid (and kind of leaves them with the impression that the kid is their's), and Hammond should be contacted, blah, blah.
From the car is the impatient shout of, "CARTER!"
They drive to the remote place where Jack was being held, and Bly and company (yes, he has other people working for him) aren't there.
Final scene is Jack holding the kid while watching the news report about the Jane Doe who was found brutally tortured and killed. And Jack softly explaining to the kid that his mom was very special and he should never forget that.
Mwahahahah. I feel I've done my duty for the day.
The beginning I don't have clear. Story opens with Jack captured by some guy on Earth, who's not nice. He treats his young wife really badly, and they've got a baby. For some reason, they're out in the middle of nowhere, in the open air.
Jack convinces the girl that Bly (dude, in my dream, he was John Bly, and I'm gonna call him that) is an ass, and she deserves more, etc. And so does her son. Her kid is her weak spot.
They break out, but have to leave the kid behind (shhh).
Somehow, they end up seperated, and the girl takes her courage in hand and goes back to get the kid. Bly verbally abuses her, tells her she's a slut, etc., but she gets away from him.
Unfortunately, she figures it's only a matter of time before he catches up to her, and she wants her kid safe, so she tries to track Jack down. But she doesn't know his last name, only that he works at Cheyenne Mountain (which may've been why Bly had him. May not), so she goes there.
The SFs at the gate won't let her in, and she's all paranoid, but one of them asks if she means Colonel O'Neill, and she says yes (figuring she's got nothing to lose), and they try to call him and get his machine. She's not patient, though, in fact, she starts to panic that Bly will show up any second and take the kid, and the SFs won't stop him, blah, blah, so she gets a sheet of paper and writes Jack a note begging him to take care of the kid, and that's she's grateful he tried to help.
And then she walks into hell (I love that line). Or drives, really.
Jack, who for some reason, was with Carter, eventually turns up at the Mountain, and discovers the kid and the note and stalks out to the car. Sam, who has a basic idea of what went on, tells them that under no circumstances is anyone but herself or Colonel O'Neill to deal with the kid (and kind of leaves them with the impression that the kid is their's), and Hammond should be contacted, blah, blah.
From the car is the impatient shout of, "CARTER!"
They drive to the remote place where Jack was being held, and Bly and company (yes, he has other people working for him) aren't there.
Final scene is Jack holding the kid while watching the news report about the Jane Doe who was found brutally tortured and killed. And Jack softly explaining to the kid that his mom was very special and he should never forget that.
Mwahahahah. I feel I've done my duty for the day.
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*re-owns you*
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*clings!!!!!*
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Well. It might be fun...
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And, c'mon, he's a psychiatrist, Jack's lost a kid....
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illegalinevitable.Hrm.
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*sings* In just seven daaaays...
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Think of the beagles!
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oh, one of my FAVORITE shots in the Changling is the shot where Mr. Amanda Tapping, Amanda and RDA are running to the fire trucks. Of course Jack's with Dr. Jackson, Sam's already married to a fireman.
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Wha? Sam's married to a fireman? *sad* This means her luv for Jack is evil!
*steals Jonas and lets him have sex*
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*groans inwardly*
Realizes it's not too late, and offers chocolate to induce you to write more Replicarter/Repli!Jack fic.
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Don't worry, I'm not planning on writing what's up there. I just wanted to talk about it. For the amusement factor of my brain.
and, er, no more of that in my head, at the moment.
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*considers*
Guess that works.
Sigh.
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*sniffle* I feel so ahead of the times.
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And, well, I'd never write it anyway. But yet, it's out of my system. ;)
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*nods* It's a good thing, that. However, I have no doubt that you'd still make it awesome. You can turn bad!fic into good!fic.