ext_98882 ([identity profile] mfirefly10.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lyssie 2012-07-07 12:50 am (UTC)

I had this on a list of fic-to-read that's starting to reach into the 100s so I apologize for taking so long to get to it.

I LOVED THIS! Ugh, I love how you focused all 5 moments on the early stages of their relationship, as I think those times are just as important as their time on New Caprica in establishing their dynamic.


And those last few lines...

When she pulled back and settled back in her seat, she was grinning. "Don't even say a word, Helo."

"Not sayin' a thing, sir."

Sam sat back on his ass, wished it wasn't numb, and then added the hope that the Admiral wasn't about to shoot them all once they'd boarded his ship.



PRICELESS! I can actually HEAR the smirk on Helo's face as he watches them and I love that Sam thought about his numb ass at the same time as their soon-to-be potential deaths :)

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